Dragons
As I stumbled into the crumbling castle, a pungent smell wafted into my nose.
A deep, threatening growl caused the ancient ground to rumble like an enormous stomach shaking with hunger.
I gazed into the inky blackness of the shadows, alarmed to see an eye ,filled with a galaxy of colours, staring straight back at me.
Two pairs of bloodstained claws appeared out of nowhere.
A set of leathery wings adorned with crimson scales swooped in as the monster revealed itself.
Will I ever see daylight again?
Fabulous! I love “Inky blackness” and “filled with a galaxy of colours”. The use of colour to create the image is amazing.
I LOVE the word pungent! It’s shocking how many GREAT descriptions that you can fit into one piece of writing!