The dragons claws punctured the open wound of lost soldiers.
The dragons teeth cut out the cries of the injured.
The dragons blood red blanket of skin protected him from danger.
The dragons unfortunate wings lost the skills to fly.
The dragons eyes stare at its next victim.
The dragons tail strangling the treasure the outsiders want.
The dragons ears sticking up waiting for more to come.
You are the dragons next prey!
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I like the fact you use sounds as well as nouns that are affected by the dragon. Why were the wings unfortunate? Ears sticking up could be improved though. Overall, a great poem!