What are you?
You are the love in an angry artist ant.
You are precious like a rare diamond shining in the golden sunset.
You are as graceful as a prima ballerina dancing a solo on the biggest ballet show of all time.
You are a dazzling butterfly spreading it’s beautiful wings for the first time.
You are a tired tabby kitten stretching it’s arms and yawning after a long day.
You are a graceful labradoodle going for a moonlit walk in the fields.
You are the poem, the beginning and the end.
This poem is really good
Mia, In school we loved your ideas especially the contradiction with the love in an angry ant, the alliteration and the thoughtful provoking last line. Did it take you a long time to write? To improve we think you needed to take out the apostrophe in its.
Thank you. Ok I will think about that for next time