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Afternoon Sunrise

Tony Started the zip wire. His knees his legs bent backwards. The air ship flying towards a dragon in the distanceTony and Tom were shivering their toes off. Scared priceless they ran down the escape hatch into the escape pod room, trying to find their weapons to slay the beasts.  His brother shocked trying to find his brother searched the whole deck. All that found were 2 mechanical dragons and his brothers foot prints...                                                                                                                                   

THUNDER started rising. A tsunami was filling the earth everything was covered in dust. The world was more like a tightrope. The boys found each other a escaped the the escape pod...  suddenly there was a bang or was there? 

 

Will they survive? 

2 Responses to “Afternoon Sunrise”

  1. I love these paragraphs I want to hear more! Could you change the bit were it says: his knees his legs bent backwards it doesn’t quite make sense. PS you are great at writing!

  2. I really like the paraghps are really intresting ! .
    The bit where it says :His knees his legs bent it doesnt really
    make sence ! lovley story want to hear more

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