Summer and Alex sky ship adventure
Alex and Summer are friends. But one day they got scared to go sky ship because there were rumours about dragons. Alex wanted to go back despite Summers dream to go to the moon, but Alex did not want to believe the moon was real so Summer wanted to show the moon was real.So Summer and Alex went to different sides of sky ship.
Without warning, the clouds covered the sky, thunder and lightning came, Alex said there was no turning back. There was animals everywhere. it was terrifying. The sky ship went left and right … Summer yelled, Alex screamed , then something bad happened…
At that moment, it all started… horrifying scary dragons approached the sky ship, Alex and Summer ran but the dragons were too fast there was no turning back. The dragons captured Summer she was screaming and crying. It was the creamy wind, it was spinning all around. The sky ship landed, and the dragons disappeared!
Well done Medine, you have created an effective build up of drama and tension in your story through your choice of words.
well done !
Thank you they much eva