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The air ship by Frankie

Air ship

 

Jim was fixing the engine and the steam rose into Jim’s face like a steam train, whilst Jacky was steering the ship to the magic land. All of the clouds were purple. The sky was as pink as cotton candy islands floating in the  air. In the distance dark objects were darting between the clouds.

 

Jim had never believed in dragons, but when one ran out of the captain’s quarters, he was shocked. Jacky ran and jumped on the dragon’s back, it threw her off. Jim looked for a weapon. He grabbed a spoon and threw it at the dragon, but it didn’t move. Jacky  got the dragon repellent and poured it into the dragon’s mouth. Iit stumbled off of the ship and fell to the abyss. However,the dragon was not dead!

2 Responses to “The air ship by Frankie”

  1. . Well done Frankie this is a great peace of work I really liked the part were Jim threw a spoon at the dragon.
    . How would you feel if you were on a sky ship and in this situation?
    . Next time you could use more descriptive words and sentences.

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