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The disaster

Without warning, five big dragons started coming straght for the skyship! Ty was frantically running aroung trying to turn the ship away from dragons. Amy, hearing all of this, came up from the bottom deck and she knew in her gut that this was a bad Idea but she never knew what was coming her way…

“WELL START THE ENGINE THEN. DONT’T JUST STAND THERE!” Ty shouted.
“ WHAT DO YOU THINK I AM DOING!”Amy shouted back with fear in her face. The dragons were still there getting closer and closer, and then the engine decided to fail! A long string of smoke came from the ship. NO! NO , NO ,NO! PLEACE DON’T FAIL ON ME NOW!” Amy said with annoyance.

Then out of nowhere, a massive fieball came their way “AMY DUCK! Ty screamed. All of a sudden, The ship was in flames, and more fieballs were coming their way. Now they were dodjoing splinters and brocken glass. Then the ship went down, and it was headding for land…

One Response to “The disaster”

  1. Fantastic work! I love the adverbs and use of commas to support the structure and the add to the drama.

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