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The spiritual ship! By Patrick

Episode 1. on a trip!

The sun rose on a hot day of J town (Junker town) above the clear, blue sky on a Friday morning. George jumped out of bed stroking his pet hamster, Hammond. It was a magnificent day outside to go on stargazer.

Grace, in the room next door, yawned and yelled “Its, it’s 6:28. What” George heard from the room next door. They were meant to get to Arthur street at 6:45. Their friend next door was up and ready with her drink and speed boots, George and Grace grabbed a drink and their favourite things like a tool box for George because he likes inventing random things and Grace picked up her favourite horn from her wardrobe because she can tame animals with them and then the hamster got in his metal hamster ball that George made at the age of 5 years old. They got dressed and ran to Lucy’s house to knock “knock, knock.” “Hi” Lucy said to the twins “Come on let’s go.” About 5 minutes later they got to Arthur’s street and got ready to fly the airship.

Then they took of into the sun set.

They took off flying over the fluffy clouds, George had a go at fixing some lightbulbs that broke on the last adventure. The ground shook, trembling the table, smashing glasses. Grace turned to the right then looked to the left and looked forward and saw Hammond the hamster was hopping around under the table because he couldn’t see until a wave of smoke came upon the children “RUN, for your life!” The crew screamed. The sheep, cows, pigs and chickens heard and started running around the meadows. Lucy and Grace heard and tried to stop the winged beast, Grace tried her horn nothing happened and then Lucy tried to jump on the creature but got hit off the stargaze, captain Rogers got hit off too but George and Hammond went down with the ship “AHHH, Hammond stay close AHHH!” He screamed at the top of his lungs.

Episode 2 The loss.

BOOM, George glanced around and saw many different things, a sign saying SAN Frisokyo and the city was buzzing with pavement cafes and street musicians. Cakes and cupcakes smelled delicious in the corner shops and tea shops. It was a bustling city, with hordes of people queueing for shops and tourist were looking at every place they could look at in the time they were staying here. A remarkable place that many people were queueing at was the Lijang tower or the old Cobra Kai set that the twins dad watched when he was ten years old. A warren had been excavated underground to move around the city and to hide from invaders in times of emergency or danger.

They crash landed in a very popular city named SAN Frisokyo, George cried  “This is the place dad wanted to go, I wish he was here today.” Grace ran to the stargazer with Captain Rogers in her hands dead. Lucy ran with her speed boots on and carried both of the two into safety.

George heard a sound it was Hammond he thought that he died in the fire in the engine but no, they both got up but then George realised that he broke his arm and in about 5 minutes he made himself a robotic arm and then dashed to see if he could help the captain in the old Cobra Kai set. “ Dad used to love this show.” Grace whispered “Yeah, he did.” George said trying to help Rogers.

Until smoke came in the set not out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2 Responses to “The spiritual ship! By Patrick”

  1. This is really good because you have used lots of adjectives.
    Why did you call it the name that you did?
    This could be even better if you used some more verbs.

  2. I like this piece of work because I like how it has Tokyo mixed with SAN Francisco for the city.
    What made you want to write this?
    You could improve it by reading through it and making sure it makes sense.

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