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The ice queen

​Logan and Leona’s swords sliced through the air as they approached the dragons. “Stop” cried an eerie voice “come now.” the seven dragons that just destroyed their sky ship flew towards the largest mountain. In the distance an ice castle was sat as clear as glass but as light as a feather.Leona pulled out a pair of binoculars and stared towards the horizon .A lady wearing an icicle crown rode on the largest ice dragon. leona sat back in disbelief -dragons are untameable- as the woman came closer she spoke “ come, you were bound to come eventually even if not intentially . My dragons did their job very well to bring your skyship to the ground but they completely obliterated it so even better. Absolutely no way to get back home now is there. Well seen as your here now make your self at home in my ice palice.”​They got transported to the soft fluffy grass on the other side if the mountains. The ice castle loomed above them menacingly. The woman opened the large oak doors . They looked inside the floors and walls were glossy and cold the grand hall was full of ice sculptures, ice crowns and the ice throne. “Come in then what are you waiting for. They looked at each other and shrugged .They stepped inside…

One Response to “The ice queen”

  1. I love the descriptive verbs like ‘obliterated’ and the adverbs like ‘menacingly’. Be careful with your capital letters.

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