We were walling fast. We might not survive. The skyship was falling rapidly through the sky the wind was whipping round my face as we fell from the sky. It would be a crash landing. What would happen? We where now only a couple of hundred meters away from the ground and then the impact came… BANG! We hit the ground with great force and with flying bits of wood everywhere it wasn’t a good place to be.

We where all fine but then Mina Shouted ” DRAGON ! “…..

One Response to “Falling”

  1. Wow this is very good. I did see on the first line you put walling not falling. At the end the cliff hanger is so well done!

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