Milly’s Sky Adventure

Milly gripped tightly to the large, purple helm, causing the palms of her hands to blister. She struggled to steady her beautiful sky ship. For a split second she felt the sharp sting of regret, this was not what she had invisioned for her magical treasure hunting adventure.

Suddenly the pink wooden ship jolted, bringing her back to the harsh reality that her hopes and dreams were being attacked.

2 Responses to “Milly’s Sky Adventure”

  1. I like the detail of your writing I like how you said “caused her hands to blister” it sounds like a real story and you’ve picked your word arrangement very carefully improving a great sentence even better.

  2. I love the ‘sharp sting of regret’! So engaging and descriptive.

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