I opened my eyes, I stood silently my knuckles whitened as I gripped the wheel as my life relied on it.

Darkness was approaching, I could feel it crawling under my skin. A gust of wind hit my face my sin was pale I must’ve been clueless of what happened a that single moment because when I looked around me I was lost…

One Response to “Speechless”

  1. It was extremely gripping because you built up the tension . Well done. You used show not tell.

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