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The sky ship

As the sky ship grazed the side of a old ruined castle, we heard a deep foul growl from below. “It sounds like a dragon!”exclaimed Lia. “AHHHHHHH!” screamed Tiana. The huge crimson dragon then swooped above them, terrified for their lives Lia struggled to steer the mighty sky ship. What will happen next?…

4 Responses to “The sky ship”

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    Anonymous March 30, 2021 at 9:39 am

    i really like the way you have left your story on a cliff hanger and i also like the adjective you described the dragon with.One thing you could improve on is using better descriptive adjectives but the rest was really good

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    21marh March 30, 2021 at 9:40 am

    i like how you made it look very tense as you said what will happen next? also your work was excellent

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    mahnoor March 30, 2021 at 9:41 am

    i like that you have left your extract on a cliff hanger.change the word sad?

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    21myat March 30, 2021 at 9:42 am

    I love how you left it on a cliff hanger

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