Ty and Mariana

Ty and Mariana landed, when they arrived they walked and walked until they found them selfs lost. Five minutes later ty and Mariana fell asleep whilst the moon lit sky was shimmering above them.The next day, Ty was awake but Mariana wasn’t he decided to awake her. Finally she awoke and they both trod of.Frighteningly a dragon was spotted. OH NO. Until…

One Response to “Ty and Mariana”

  1. Maybe you could miss out the “five minutes later” and just put later instead

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