Sky Ship Adventure
Out of nowhere a black boulder flew into the balloon there were now two holes. Jimmy’s heart was thumping like a bass drum. The ship was going down head first. He managed to get hold of the steering wheel to pull it to one side as soon as he did, the ship started falling sideways. The ship caught on fire Jimmy felt really dizzy from going back and forward. He managed to get into the Metal emergency room, it had chairs with seat belts so that they wouldn’t go flying he pressed the eject button, the pod jumped out of the ship they were heading straight to the grey rough ground.
“BANG!” The pod hit the ground like an asteroid he got out and saw people gathered around him, he was scared his heart felt like it was in his throat. They were taking him somewhere he was frightened he was going to a big haunted castle, at the front there was a chrome tarantula with blood all over it, its mouth was open they took Jimmy into the castle there was a man sitting on a grey chair.
WOW! I love this story! Maybe instead of: ‘there was a man sitting on a grey chair’ I would say: ‘where a man sat on a grey chair’. This is utterly amazing though! Cant wait to hear more!