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The mystery

Several minutes later, I returned back to the sky ship to patch up the balloon once again, something wasn’t normal… there was a shed next to the main door of the skyship . Where did it come from ? I was in two minds of if I should check it out or not, I made my decision to look . The large, brown oak door had spikes a round it. Caustiously, I tiptoed in.
Without warning , the door slammed behind me … I could see a candle lit in the distance, there was red paint dripping off the wall, what I could work out it said look to your right . Without thinking I looked to my right there was a black oval that had appeared infront of me … I could feel something grabbing me, trying to pull me into this black oblivion. SUDDENLY! there was a ear splitting scream from the conner of the room, the black portal had disappeared. I ran over clutching the candle. It was a girl , she had been tied up with a rope, luckly I had my trusty pocket knife with me, so I cut through the rope and freed her .

​”Thankyou , Thankyou !” she sobbed.
“Your welcome, but may I ask how this happend ?” I asked in confusion.
“Yes, yes, you see the thing is I was just like you I came here and the portal was there.“
“The portal? I had no idea that was a portal.“
“Yes a portal,” she said.
“Wait what’s your name?” I was thinking to myself, maybe this could be more serious than I thought.
“ My name is Leah,Leah Goodwell” she stuttered.
“Oh my gosh, you’re the girl who went missing just a few years ago!”
I started to panic. “Years!. I had no idea I had been here for years!“ She started to slowly break down and cry.
“Oh don’t cry its ok , w-we wil get out of here .“ I told her, or I hoped at least.
She said to me she had a key that might open the door, but she was too weak to turn it, so I tried … Bang !! the portal was back ,she juped up and ran over to me holding me tight .Suddenly, something stepped out a dark figure holding a tridant …

2 Responses to “The mystery”

  1. Wow! The suspense is brilliant! You leave your reader with so many questions. I love it.

  2. I really liked your vocabulary choices

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