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All of a sudden, the ground rumbled, Ty stood in fear, he couldn’t move. He saw the ground fall apart, he wanted to run but couldn’t. Then he was falling, into the dark void covering the path. He woke up in a completely different place. He saw a metal door, he opened it, it was covered in darkness. Luckly he saw flashlight in the room earlier, he went to look for it ,but it was gone. He turned around to see a light, he kept on hearing voices come from it repeatedly saying “wake up”, he went closer and closer. He went to the other side and there was a red button, he pressed it and in a blink of an eye he was in a different room, on a bed, Mariana was next to Ty. Ty screamed in fear because there was a dragon next to him! Mariana stood there peacefully while Ty screamed in fear. Mariana said calmy “don’t worry he is my friend.” “He saved you from the cave, you had passed out.” Explained Mariana, “he wont harm you.” “We have stopped at tavel city.Ty and Mariana went outside to see the city is was amazing it was like paradise.
This is really exciting! “All of a sudden” is a great opening. Perhaps try to describe a little more. A few adverbs and adjectives could make it even more enticing.