The return
Quiely,Elena led them out of the jail cell as she knew that the dragons would find them where they were. The hallway felt cold and gloomy, it felt dangerous and unpredictable like something bad could happen at any given moment. With every footstep they took… the dragons got closer and closer. Elena took them down a pearl white staircase into a cellar
“ You will be safe here” Elena suspiciously said
“ Well where are you going” Amy said in confusion
“ Just stay here”.
Then, in the blink of an eye she was gone.
“ WAIT. COME BACK! YOU CANT LEAVE US HERE!” Amy ran up to the door screeming and banging to let her out.
“ Amy stop. Amy stop. AMY STOP!” Ty repeted “ CALM DOWN! We will find a way out of here.
Once Elena had climbed the staircase, she stepped into a cold dark room. She was lost. Without waning,the lights started flikering and a dark figure crossed the room. She heard scraching and scraping, she could hear the faint sound of someone breathing.Staying as silent as possible, Elena turned around looking for the door which seemed nonexistent at the moment. In an instant, all the doors slamed. There was no way out. She was trapped. The figure came closer and coser.
“ Hello Elena. Miss me”
Now all Elena could do was run…
Brilliant suspense! I was questioning what was going to happen all the time! Great work. Perhaps check through a couple of your questions.