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The temple

​ At that moment, while they sailed through the sea searching for land one of the crew memders yelled “There in the water! Theres a temple or bulding like structure!” “ok” repleied Ty and ran to the edge of the ship and said “ come hear, look in the water”. In an instant, the dragon ran up to Ty same as marine and some of the crew members “DROP THE ANCHORS!” shouted the captin. Without waiting, couple crew members ran to a to one side of the ship and threw a small anchor off the ship, then they ran to a different side and did the same. “ Can we go down there!?! Can we?!” shouted Ty. After a while, the captin repleied after hesitating a bit and said” Ok, but we have to perform a magic spell to let us breath under water.” “Yay!” yelled Ty. With out warning, the captin said “ We’ll need a fish’s soul and two bottles filled with sea water.” At that moment, the crew started runing around and colected weired item. With out warning, they shouted we got every thing we need.
​After a while, the spell was complete Ty and marine got handed a two bottles full with a blue liqued. With out hesitation, Ty drank the wierd liqued. Suddenly, Ty started jumping around and said “come on lets go!” Marine drank the liqued and immediately started jumping around like Ty and then she randmoly jumped in the water and shouted “come on guys!” Ty jumped in after her then they both started to swim to the temple. After a couple minutes of swimming, Ty and Marine where at the temple. In an instant, a large door opened Ty and Marine swam in and noticed a large figure standing in the dark room, and said “ long time no see.”

One Response to “The temple”

  1. Fab work! I love that you’ve worked really hard on your sentence openers like “Without warning,”. Perhaps you could describe what the characters can hear in order to build the tension even more.

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