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You’ve probably been on a airship

You probably have been on a airship with a bright blue sky and going over bright blue water. Remember how it feels to feel that heat on you tanned skin and the wind powering through your hair, eventually it will get peaceful Lang you will never want to get if because of that gust of wind going through you hair.

3 Responses to “You’ve probably been on a airship”

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    Beth March 11, 2021 at 9:23 am

    1. I like how you said the wind powering through your hair.
    2. Why did you pick airships to write about?
    3. To make it even better, you could change the last sentence to something other than your hair blowing in the wind.

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    Millie H March 11, 2021 at 9:23 am

    1) I like how you used things like, tanned skin and wind powering.
    2) Have you ever seen or been on an airship?
    3) To make this even better, you could add something to describe your surroundings below.

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    Mikolaj March 11, 2021 at 9:27 am

    1) I like the way you described the bright blue sky.
    2) Have you ever saw an airship?
    3) To make it even better you could name the airship e.g. The London Airship and The Bristol Airship.

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