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The aurora by Logan

Episode 1

Dipper gripped the rail shivering in fear,looking down from the height where they were flying from.He watched as the clouds engulfed them while his twin sister Mable ran around hyper,amazed at the view and jumping for the clouds,both on a journey with captain O’Shea driving the skyship.All of a sudden a pack of thunder dragon were coming right for them shooting bolts of lightning just missing them.They started to rush it to a cloud.When they got to one a struck of lightning hit the balloon so they had to make a emergency landing while Mable was attacking a sky demon with her grappling hook.

Episode 2.

When they finally got to a safe place majestic earth dragons stared at the ship,a fresh aroma of fruit filled the air all there surroundings seeming like trees.Giant,hidden building where just in there sight as they noticed that this was the hidden city of the wilder warriors they thought it was just myth the captain and the crew threw down the ladder and went off to get some supplies to repair the ship and they told Mable and Dipper to stay in the ship.

Episode 3

When the twins where waiting on the ship a dark shadow emerged from the darkness.Mable being the beaver one went over and looked and spotted a baby thunder dragon she grabbed it and saw that the wing was hurt so she told Dipper to get something to wrap the wing in so He ran and got a blanket and wrapped the wing in it.Mable was thinking of a name “I’ll name her storm” and so a new member was added,storm joined the team

Episode 4

When the crew got back they had a jump when they saw storm but they said not to worry about her so they started to patch the hole up and even storm helped out then they where back on track.Dipper started to feel home sick and was worried they where gonna get lost when Mable was happy about being out in the sky calmly watching the stars but then Dipper saw something threw the clouds and thought the thunder dragons were back but when the captain looked they saw a pack of cloud dragon not harmful at all so he told them to head to bed and so they Driffield off to sleep.

One Response to “The aurora by Logan”

  1. Great work Logan, there are some really good parts to your story.
    I really like some of the vocabulary you have used, such as, ‘engulfed, majestic and emerged’.
    How did you could up with the names for your characters?
    To make this even better you could read through each sentence carefully, checking where the full stops should go.

    Keep up the great work.

    Mr G

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