The Fire Dragon
There are a huge variety of dragon breeds: forest,ice,lightning,snow and the storm dragon. However, the most dangerous dragon is the Fire Dragon. Not much is known about this dragon because it rarely shows itself.
The Fire Dragon is a deep red colour with a stripe of orange that makes the dragon stand out in the dark. Unsurprisingly, its wings are made of fire. When he flaps them hot sparks go everywhere nearly starting fire to flammable objects. He is mostly the reason that forest fires start! Like most dragons, they have a spiky tail, if it swings it at you, you are in big trouble because it can stab you with its poisonous spikes. That makes you only be able to live for a minute. Amazingly, it has ruby teeth that glisten in the sunlight, matching with their eyes but the eyes are much more deadly. When it is angry its eyes shoots out lasers that burn you into ashes in one second!
No one knows where the Fire Dragon lives. Some people think he lives in a volcano sleeping in the lava and when he roars it makes the volcano explode. Others think differently, and say that he made a fire base and sleeps in it.
Many people have tried to find Fire Dragons and never came back. People believe that the Fire Dragon turned them into ashes or they just died on the way. That’s why no one else has gone to find one.
This is a very impressive piece of work. On the 5th line, you could use (instead of ‘he’) ‘this great beast’. Just a suggestion.