episode 3
Jacob and Matthew, whose hair was rather fuzzy looked around. Both terrified they Jumped out of the dinosaur and ran away.
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Hey there, nice few sentences you have here, perfect punctuation and everything!
You know what would of made this even better? If you made it just a little more longer as you left me at cliff point here! Some great work here.
Hi Jacob,
1. I love the sentences and the bit when you said and they jumped out the dinosaur.
2. Could you add more to it?
3. You could improve on the dinosaur bit and maybe say ” Then they jumped out the dinosaur and ran as fast as they could”
Well done keep writing!!!!
Exciting sentence i want to know what happens very good job but maybe do mre next time…