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Midnight Gazer By Ava SWW

The Midnight Gazer

Running as fast as a cheetah, Captain Jane ran to the steering wheel so that she could try to save the crew. The wheel wasn’t working. At that moment there was a bang. The Midnight Gazer was falling apart.
“Crew hide in the safety room, that can’t fall apart so we will be safe there!” Captain Jane bellowed
Everyone ran as fast as they could. There was a jolt. Jack and the rest of the crew fell. Jack turned his head to see Percy’s wing trapped under a rock. He couldn’t let Percy stay there. Jack had known Percy for his whole life. So he ran over to Percy to save him!
“Jack what are you doing come back now!” Jane exclaimed
Jack didn’t listen. Without warning, the Midnight Gazer fell to the ground. The only thing that was left was the safety room. Jack and Percy were gone.

 

Midnight Gazer part 3

Captain Jane breathed heavily. This was the moment that she knew Jack and Percy were gone forever.
“Ohh Ohh Eee Eee!”
Captain Jane jumped in shock. She paused. Slowly, she opened the door of the safety room and walked over to the creature limping. Whilst the crew were falling from the sky, Captain Jane fell on her leg.
“Hey little guy, are you lost?”
The creature put his thumbs up.
“I..It..It’s a monkey!” Jane stumbled.
She had always wanted a monkey ever since she was a kid. Carelessly, the monkey ran over to Captain Jane, climbed onto her shoulder and laughed.
“I’m going to call you…Abu.”
She smiled. It was the perfect monkey. Then she realised that Abu’s leg had a large scratch.
“It must have got hurt whilst the ship was falling.” She sighed under her breath.

Abu shivered whilst Captain Jane looked around the safety room for a plaster and a blanket. Captain Jane, who has a large heart, wrapped Abu in a blanket. Abu your safe now. ​

 

2 Responses to “Midnight Gazer By Ava SWW”

  1. Hi Ava!
    Your work is really good!
    Where did you get the ideas from?
    Nothing really that needs improving!

  2. To Ava I liked the bit about it was the perfect monkey.
    Where did the idea’s come from?
    Maybe you could of said
    shouted “Ohh Ohh Eee Eee!” From Charlie SWW

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