In The Room Of Owls
I walked the room of owls, and the walls started to hoot.
Feathers covered everything in a blanket of brown; mice filled the dinner bowl.
Great wing spans hugged the chairs, tipping them forwards and back.
In the corners, trees with massive holes sprouted through the golden pink carpet.
Terrible talons pieced wood, gripping round the light shade.
Suddenly green eyes turned towards me.
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Great work Olivia! I liked the part where you said “In the corners, trees with massive holes sprouted through the golden pink carpet.” Why did you use the room of owls? On the last sentence I would use green eyes stared at me not turned to me because it makes it seem like it was facing the other way. From Cameron SWW.