Poems Lily SWW
In the room of laptops,
my eyes turned into a screen.
In the room of lightning,
I got taken to hospital.
In the room of space,
I was floating around the moon.
In the room of trees,
I felt like I was going to fall.
In the room of colours,
My white top got rainbows on it.
In the room of hair,
I got strong spray up my nose.
In the room of goodbye’s,
I left my poetry.
Hi Lily your work is really good. On the fourth verse were did you get that idea of you felt like you were going to fall. On second verse you should of said I was taken to hospital no I got taken to hospital. From Henry SWW.