I want to paint a Black Panther.
I want to paint a Black Panther with sharp claws, pointy teeth and fluffy fur. Running around the woods and jungles hunting for people and feasting on animals and giving it to his family.
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I like how you have used quite a bit of detail. Why did you use the black panther? Maybe your piece of writing could be a bit longer.
1.I love how you chose to make it about a black panther.
2.Why did the panther give his feast to his family?
3.I think you could of put in a 2A sentence.
Hi Cristian! Your writing is so detailed! Does the panther end up dying from eating no animals? Maybe you could write ‘he’ or ‘she’ ran around the woods and jungles?