What would it be like if dinosaurs were still alive by Jake.
I want to paint
A dangerous dinosaur stomping through the dense forest, like a muddy mountain with claws like sharp nails. A dinosaurs tail like a branch full of green leaves, swaying in the wind. A vicious volcano with lava the colour of a double decker bus.
I want to paint the end of this poem.
Hi Jake, this work is absolutely amazing! I can guess why you`ve got dinosaurs! Maybe you could change ‘a dinosaurs tail’ to ‘the dinosaur`s tail’?