The Treasures of The World
If I were summoned to create a
treasure, I would take:
The mustiness of an old book, the click of
a keyboard typing out a new bestselling book,
the drowsiness of an early spring morning and the days on an out of date calendar,
The petals of a flower crown,
the vines of a humble cottage,
the smoke out of a piping hot chimney,
the colours of a puffin’s beak,
a leaf of a dying maple tree,
the love of a newlywed couple,
the numbers of a ruler,
the bacteria off a disposable mask,
And the closed sign off the Nowhere Emporium.
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1. We thought it was a brilliant poem with lots of description
2. What made you think of those interesting ideas
3. We think you should make the start more sense because it is quiet confusing
1. Your poem was great and I liked the layout.
2.Could you make it rhyme?
3.You could add more adjectives like the “bright” petals of a flower crown.
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Could you extend it.
Try add more adjectives.