Ash and Pikachu
Even know it is sunny Pikachu finds a Pokémon bus and enters it. He is so exited he wants to find a good friend. Then Pikachu saw a trainer named Ash. Then Ash stared oddly at Pikachu “what a strange Pokémon” though Ash. Pikachu looked up nervously scared and afraid. Suddenly Ash felt a strong connection with Pikachu. So Ash walked slowly up to Pikachu and comforted him , it look as if he was upset. 10 YEARS LATER “Ash and Pikachu best panther’s in crime!!!”, said the news.
it is nice but you need to work on the spaces but i like your suspence