The comfy chair by George lee yr 4
Prolouge
Even though the, chair is so comfy.Even though, it looks so nice. Even though, it has a cup holder. No one would ever let ben sit in the chair until he did.
Chapter one
Ben had always desired to sit in the comfy,nice chair but his dad was always on it.Ben was annoyed so he decided tomorrow morning he would sit in the chair whilst he dad was asleep. Ben crept through the living room.He sat on the chair not knowing he would teleport to another dimension.
He gazed at a glorious golden football moving in the sunlight. He walked through an open door and he picked up a gem and suddenly heard a noise he dropped the gem. The voice said you have found my precious gems, he said you can look but don’t touch.
Ben really wanted to touch one of the gems, eventually he picked up a gem and ran . The doors around the building suddenly slammed shut and a loud alarm went of.The man was furious he sarted yelling at ben as loud as he could.
Ben was terrified he picked up the gem and jumped on the same chair what got him to this place.He appeared back home,he heard the footsteps of his dad walking down the stairs.He jumped out the chair and hid.
This was an amazing piece of work.Maybe you could use some more better vocabulary.But all around I really enjoyed this.