The emporium
The shadow emporium prologue
As the emporium visited city after city, Mr Tom was heading for Dublin when a new face appeared at the door and grimaced at Mr Tom,
“Hello again.” He said. It was Ryan. The grandson of Mr Tom…
Chapter 1 the secret
He stepped inside. Mr Tom watched Ryan with great care as he stumbled across the wand of destiny. It was carved spectacularly and had a dragon’s breath inside it.
“It’s wonderful,” Ryan stated.
“Yeah, it is,” Mr gold replied, “it is.”
I enjoyed the fact that Mr Tom watched Ryan as he touched the wand of destiny. Was Mr Gold a new character or is it meant to say Mr Tom? You could add some more description about the Emporium.