Chapter 3: The Mysterious Inkey Figure by Harry
Chapter 3: The Mysterious Inkey Figure
As Jimmy dashed to the house he noticed that there was a forest. He decided to go to the house first. He yanked the door.
“Locked,” said Jimmy with disappointment. So he searched the forest. A couple hours later Jimmy was tempted to leave the room but he was not going to give up; he was determined to find a key for the house. Suddenly he spotted something in his peripheral vision; it was a box in the river. He rolled up his sleeve and plunged his hand in the water. He managed to get the box but he suddenly got bit by something he didn’t think it was anything though he opened the box and in it was a key he immediately ran to the house and put the key in the keyhole.
“Please work please work please work” beeged Jimmy. It opened and he entered and it was empty. He heard creaking coming from upstairs. He didn’t want to look up there but he did. He saw something inkey and it turned towards him. Jimmy ran back down the stairs and went to the door but it wasn’t there. He hid. He didn’t know what to do.
Hi Harry, I really like your work! Instead of, “Locked” said Jimmy with disappointment, maybe you could say, “locked,” said Jimmy, disappointed. You spelt begged wrong you said beeged. Really good work though! Well done. From Henry SWW.
Hello Harry this is amazing great job and great use of words such as:
peripheral vision.
determined.
dashed.