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The Antique Emporium Chapter 3

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The Nowhere Emporium chapter 3 by Roisin

Chapter 3 by Roisin

Tessa wandered to the kitchen, The kitchen had everything she needed:there were webby, dusty and rusty pans;silver spoons were sitting there peacefully;and sharp knifes lay there in the wet sink.

“Hello,” shouted Tessa, seeing if anyone was there. But all she could hear was silence.Tessa stood in a dark hall, No one was to be seen in each room. The chairs looked like they were knitted by a granny, all beautiful and rough. For a second there Tessa thought she had stepped into a nightmare.

What she had wrote in the book was a wish but it was never going to be true. There were no signs of people living here, Tessa had never met here parents before. Tessa was certain they weren’t her, nothing felt right then she heard it.

Something downstairs, it was a sinister noise. It was loud and sounded like something was being dragged. Tessa heard the sound again and stood still, keeping silent. She tipped toed down the stairs and turned to the kitchen. Nothing was seen but the light glitching.

A second, later the hiss came back. Turning around Tessa dashed to the living room. She looked and looked again, a scaly black shadow creeped upon her, hazel eyes glared down, spikes led all across the floor. There wasn’t any hesitation this time. Tessa ran as fast as her little legs could go.

Nothing was there, except a lush forest. The shadows grew, so she dashed back to where the doors had been. She searched and searched but it was never to be seen again.

 

The Anywhere Emporium-Chapter 3 By Gabriella

As destroyed as the little house is it had all the essentials you would need to live there: the outside was neat and tidy but the inside was the opposite; books were on the floor and curtains were ripped; and pictures were hung on the wall, forcing Chasmeen to tear up.

 

“Is anyone here?” called Chasmeen, realizing she might not  be the only one in the house. The only voice she had met was the echo of her own. The curtains stopped blowing in the wind and the floorboards stopped creaking. She stepped towards the dark shadowy hallway until she met a door at once, she was beginning to think she was in a nightmare.

 

The village and the house wasn’t the only things she had drawn in Miss Gold’s book, she had drawn the thing she took for granted and what she had always wanted back. But there was no happy little family living there, there wasn’t even a little boy, her brother living there. This didn’t feel right this isn’t what Chasmeen drew in Gold’s book. Then that noise filled her ears.

 

It sounded not like walking but like crawling on 4 legs. It was coming from the other room that she had just been in she opened the door slightly trying to see what it was but the hallway was too dark. She was sweating now the repetitious stomp began to make the house shake. Thinking of the worst, she reacted quick.

 

What could this beast be? Is it after Chasmeen? She opened the door and tiptoed out into the hallway, the door slammed behind her which made her tiptoe a bit faster. Then she saw it the emerald green eyes and the giant teeth a loud roar hurt her ears she had to make a run for it.

 

She sprinted through the door out the pastel yellow gate and up the grey path she had came from. Trying to catch her breath she checked behind her and found the beast watching her from a far. She kept running along the path then realised something was off the door from the Anywhere Emporium was gone…

The Vintage Emporium Chapter 3 by Tessa

Keisha walked through the Nature Patch. It was covered in plants that every gardener would dream for. There was this one plant that looked very strange. The Nature Patch was a brilliant sight; Broken branches surrounding the old oak tree; Succulent plants taking over a portion of the lush, fresh grass; Marigold flowers shining in the sun, casting and orange glow and bushes drifting in the soft breeze.

“Hello?” said Keisha curiously as she thought if anyone else was there. All she could hear was blue birds tweeting in the distance. She decided to stroll further through the Nature Patch. The sky became a little darker and hedges covered the sides whilst walking.

Keisha had made a wish when she had drawn in Stewart’s book. That wish was to see her pet cow after 3 years but there was no sight of her cow.

The tender bushes moved roughly. Something or someone was moving. It hissed like a snake as if it was trying to say something. Keisha kept silent and looked around. There was nothing, just the flowers and trees.

A few minutes later, Keisha heard the sound again and again like a drumbeat ringing in her ears. She walked her way back to the bush and there she saw it: Brown hazel eyes so bright that you could see it 5 feet away; Teeth as sharp as a knife bulging towards her and claws that could scratch to make a wound. Keisha knew she was in danger so she headed back to the door.

When she made her way up, there was no door. Just round trees and different colour waterfalls spreading endlessly through this eerie world she had discovered. “Come” declared a voice suspiciously.Continue reading“The Vintage Emporium Chapter 3 by Tessa”

The Antique Emporium – Chapter 3 by Izabella

Chapter 3

She was now in the lush forest, there were flowers filling the ground. Birds were chirpping and wind flew in the sky forming a flower shaped cloud. The forest included natural elements: water glistening in the sun making a calm sound; large trees sitting on the ground calmly; and green grass swaying from side to side.

“Hello? is anyone there?” whispered Sybil, slowly walking around wondering if anyone was hiding in the forest. Bushes started rustling and a noise came from behind the sage, prickly bush, Sybil ran towards it to check what had been happening, sweat rolled down her face and her legs trembled.

Sybil thought she had seen her uncle but it was just a dream. She remembered that she had drawn her uncle in the book and she had longed to meet him since he went missing seven years ago, the last time she saw him was in that forest, when they went camping.

A second later, the same noise appeared again but whispers also came through her. Sybil looked around trying to find something to protect herself, a vast wind blew through her and she froze. Sybil felt her uncle tap her shoulder so immediately turned around to check but nothing was there, only a lonely tree. Then came another sound. Bulging, sapphire eyes came out from behind a gate then ran back in, like it was a sign for Sybil but.. what did it mean?

Sybil ran to the gate because she heard the same sound again, her head was spinning but she still kept going. Then she saw it, a dark gloomy creature crept over her, and that’s when she knew that she messed up, she took three steps back then ran. There was a giant log that she hadn’t seen, so then she just kept running and then, POOF! She tripped over and realised the creature was behind her, so she got back up and tried to dash back to the door.

Synil realised she was trapped, nothing was left there except the cabin, the forest, Sybil and the shadow. She slipped down to the floor and looked up.

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