The Secret Palace…

Chapter 3

Eleven turned around as soon as she saw the old, mysterious man. She ran for her life going through door to door, as if she was about be turned into a rat or something by a witch. She found the last door, wide open in the hall way, she ran in there and when she was inside it was like another dimension. She explored around everywhere, the houses, the shops, the schools. But there was no one on each place.

It was like a dimension that every single kid could wish for. She went into the shops and took all the things she wanted then ran out like it was a robbery, well it kinda was. She went inside the schools and played some games on the iPads and drew on the boards in every room. She used the speaker as well,which would be pretty fun to be honest. After all the fun things she did, she went inside the best house which was a mansion!

She went in every single room she could find. She found a gaming room, a massive bed, a pool,and a snooker table. There was a backyard as well with footballs in the bags, two goals, a tennis court, a basketball court and the best of all a water park! She went in the water park and zoomed to the slide and went down. But then she thought for a second

and said “ what about that man and how is this possible?”.  But then after, she ran all the way back inside the mansion and sat down and watched tv for a while.

Then as soon as she thought “what about my family?” She ran out of the mansion jumped through the portal and ran out of the pyramid and went home. She told her mum what  had happened and her family came with her into the pyramid and then into the portal. They were all so surprised on how she found this. Her mum said “ how did you manage to find this?”  I thought and said “ it doesn’t matter”. Then she thought if she told the whole story, her mum would hate her and her family would too. So she showed them all the things in and out of the house.