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Plan the middle of my story

” My name is James Rathmullah,” he said, staring at Freddy until he shifted from one foot to the other, uneasily.”This is my shop.Do you like it?”Here is my book of Adventures.You are here to look around my shop but do not touch the books!”

A moment later,Mr James Rathmullah had disappeared with a swirl of his thin, brown overcoat, behind a curtain and Freddy was alone.He realised that he had been holding his breath.He had meant to continue looking around the shop but there was something about the book that called to him.He longed to look what was hidden in its forbidden pages.He looked around the shop and would fust watch up a long. The cupboard which has disappeared to be at least one thousand lights.Where do they all lead, he wondered?

Looking back, he carefully opened the book.Each page contained a different idea for some sort of wonderful world.There was paintings and lists about recipes,8 cites,towns,skydiving,jungle,cars,countries,airport,buildings and more.in each country there were animals beyond dreaming.

Unexpectedly,there was a chocolate pen in his hand  and he was a jungle and inside the jungle there was a village and outside the window,he drew the outside of that one thing that he wanted everyday.

He heard a door bell.He threw the chocolate pen away as he heared the door bell called him.He frightendenly tiptoed and slowly opened the door.

He dashed, not into a room, but spyingly  he entered the forbiiden zoo.Sunlight flittered through the wild animals.He paused and listened.It was quite still,except for the sound of the wild animals roaring from the water.A path curled away from him ,towads  a village.The strangest thing was that it all looked execatly as he was imaging he had drawn inside my James book.Without pausing for a second, without looking back,without any concern,Freddy ran down the path towards the haunted village.

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