Chapter 4 the golden eye by Patrick.
Chapter 4: The golden eye.
Ignoring the creature he tried to look for the door he came in and will be leaving in hopefully, he saw nothing, not one bit of evidence until he turned around. He saw a stream of light coming from a strawberry planet he knew it had to be the door.
He floated across the cosmos all the way there, he felt tired and exhausted it took ages to get there but he knew in his mind it was worth it. Then he remembered that the creature was still following him so he never stopped, his face drizzled with sweat. The planet looked deserted until he got over the hedge three doors stood waiting to be opened. One of the doors was a birch door and the others were a oak and pine. He was really confused and didn’t know which door to pick. His mind shut off as soon as this odd screeching noise that hurt his ears came. He took one deep breath and it stopped, he kept thinking of which door it could be.
He didn’t know what to do, his brain was working so hard that all of a sudden he felt a bit nauseous. He kept thinking, until the sound came back directly into his ears. He let out a huge scream which made him lose his focus. His started to blur and his thought disappear with one blink of an eye. He turned around and saw the the weird, un-human like creature was racing towards him, which scared him more than a snake, then he realised it was only a couple of feet away from him. His eyes only focused on the oak door he knew the it was the oak door. He took one leap for man kind. He pulled and pulled until he knew the door knob was stuck he had a plan in the time he had, he thought it wouldn’t work but it was. He turned around and realised it reached the planet. The creature gun charged up its gun, boom the creature pulled the trigger, the laser flew past Edward hitting the door knob he ran directly to the door. Whoosh the exit flew open Edward jumped through with no hesitation he jumped through it.
He got back up the gun was charging up boom the trigger was pulled. Edward jumped up and shut the door making a loud bang. He ran as fast as his little legs could run, he stopped as soon as he hit the end of the hallway. He crept and crept until he got close enough he knew he had too dash across the landing to the exit. He ran but then he heard a voice, who could of it have been, he turned around nothing was there he turned back around knowing he would have to get home for supper “Ahh, did you find what you were looking for,” the Emporium owner said to Edward in a annoyed voice.
He ran out until he stopped when he heard the shop owner voice “The one thing that this shop can’t do is show the future are bring back the past,” his stern voice said to Edward, whilst he was polishing a golden golden eagle.
Then he shouted to Edward “ Come back again,” Edward ran away from the building with fear.
He realised that the floor was completely full of water but when he turned around he noticed the Emporium disappeared like it was never there. His dad was correct. He thought it was just a fairytale or a myth, he ran home to his house and for a strange reason thought he was being followed but that did not stop him from running home ready to tell his dad what he had just experienced. He was amazed and he knew his dad would also be excited like him.
He ran and ran until he stopped to catch a breath he still had a weird feeling that someone or something was watching his every move. He got back up and kept running, as soon as he saw his house he ran quicker than he had ever ran. He busted through the door and told his dad the story he was more amazed then Edward was his jaw dropped to the floor and his eyes widened. Then his eyes focused on outside and he saw a golden eye staring inside there house then with a blink of an eye it disappeared from Edwards eye sight he was confused and wanted to go back to that Emporium another time but he knew it would have to be in a couple of months but then he thought that it may not be here ever again because it was magical. He knew then he would have to visit the Emporium again.
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