When I Was Out Walking
When I Was Out Walking…
When I was out walking,
I met a girl named Cat.
She had ears as pointed as the pyramids.
She was always alert.
I met a man named Peacock.
He had a beak as sharp as a tent peg.
He had eyes as smooth as the surface of a pond and
vibrant feathers that he flashed from side to side
as though he was fanning someone.
I met a woman named Snow Leopard.
She had sapphire-blue eyes that were deep and mysterious
but still twinkled with the joy, understanding and
fun of being a feline. She had a tail as long as an anaconda
and markings that made her look as if she had won
hundreds of rosettes.
I met a girl named Jaguar.
She was strong as a dump truck and had
muscles that rippled under her beautiful,
golden spotted coat that gleamed in the sun.
She glided through the water, illuminous gold
against clear liquid and sunk her fangs into the armoured plates of a crocodile!
I met a woman named Tree.
She was 20 feet tall and had oak-brown hair with a tinge of green,
that was rough as tree bark.
She had a little nest of baby ********
that lived there and chirped all day.
I met a man named Thought.
He was hunched as a question mark
and had eyes as definite as a full stop.
I met a girl named Fish.
She had scintillating, chintz scales
that reflected dancing rainbow light.
She had round, glazed eyes that
have seen horrific things, such as
humans dragging their long, death-nets
through the sea towards the frantic, flitting, fish,
as the waves roared in protest.
I met Life.
Everything from the first
breath of a tiny new born kitten
to a tidal wave and a tornado.
Life is the centre of attention,
sprawling on the earth and being
selfish.
But then, what would we do without it?
This is a wonderful poem Georgie, I especially like the imagery in your verse about meeting a ‘Man names Thought’ and the way you have ended your poem is very effective, well done.
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well done Georgie!
This is a great poem, Georgie! Well done. But at the end, you are doing something cute, and something scary, and chinchillas are cuter than cats, in my opinion.