The Ocean Lily by Sonny
The ocean lily whisper its sea song as slow as a snail moving
There roots are like dolphins jumping out of the ground looking for water
Its leafs were as wet as a hot tub on a sunny day
Its pollen was as colourful as coral in Spain
Its ocean strawberries tasted like a Friday chippy
Its stem was as cool as cucumber on your eyes
The lava oak whispered its rough lava song
There roots are like dead souls coming out off the ground
Its fruit are Spicer then ghost peppers it explodes from the spice pressure
Its twigs are so hot they can burn right through human skin
Its leaves are as bright as a dragon bursting out fire from its gigantic mouth
Its buds are as small but it’s as venomous as a cobra.
This is well written and is very descriptive why is the name called ocean Lilly I think to make this even better you can add write more each part of the tree