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THE LAND OF NEVERBELIEVE

The Land Of Neverbelieve

This is the most recent picture of the Night Flower.

Imagine a forest without trees; an ocean without fish: a beach with no sand. If we all make small changes to help our world, then it will stay green. Our air is being polluted by nasty Co2 and our holy Night Flower is losing its glow. Because our air is becoming polluted, this means the flower is loosing its glow; if this flower looses its glow the island will flood.

To help stop our beautiful planet from flooding you can; Take your bike to work instead of a car, this     will stop the pollution. Reuse plastic bags and don’t bin them. Use a water-bottle instead of getting plastic bottles because

they take over 450 years to bio degrade.

Our peaceful island needs to be helped. If the air around our island builds up into a hot atmosphere then our forests will burn and our island will flood. Imagine all the people in danger. The island will disappear, all the animals will be in danger. The beautiful lands will be destroyed. But I still believe in hope. Make sure that you help save this island keep the glow on this flower and we can save it. The beautiful lands shall be saved and the people on this island shall live a long and happy life.

This a map of the world the island is hiding.

 

 

                                           By Lola.M

The Land Of Neverbelieve

This is the most recent picture of the Night Flower.

Imagine a forest without trees; an ocean without fish: a beach with no sand. If we all make small changes to help our world, then it will stay green. Our air is being polluted by nasty Co2 and our holy Night Flower is losing its glow. Because our air is becoming polluted, this means the flower is loosing its glow; if this flower looses its glow the island will flood.

To help stop our beautiful planet from flooding you can; Take your bike to work instead of a car, this     will stop the pollution. Reuse plastic bags and don’t bin them. Use a water-bottle instead of getting plastic bottles because

they take over 450 years to bio degrade.

Our peaceful island needs to be helped. If the air around our island builds up into a hot atmosphere then our forests will burn and our island will flood. Imagine all the people in danger. The island will disappear, all the animals will be in danger. The beautiful lands will be destroyed. But I still believe in hope. Make sure that you help save this island keep the glow on this flower and we can save it. The beautiful lands shall be saved and the people on this island shall live a long and happy life.

This a map of the world the island is hiding.

 

 

                                           By Lola.M

One Response to “THE LAND OF NEVERBELIEVE”

  1. This is a super piece of persuasive writing Lola, well done. You created a world that definitely needs saving!

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