The Dreadful Land

The crew were sitting in their seats when all of a sudden, the air-ship was spinning out of control. The crew were screaming, as something like this has never happened before.   They tried to protect everything, there dinner, water.  The captain tried to steer the ship so they get a safe landing.  Suddenly, they hit the ground with a bang.


When Ty and the crew stumbled out of the air-ship.  To their horror, there were mammoth sized claw marks on the balloon.  Despite the feeling of the air-ship being demolished by some dragon’s claws, the crew went on through the fog leaving Ty and Mariana alone.  As they wondered aimlessly, staying within visuals of the broken ship, they noticed a stench that drifted up their noses. Mariana was wondering around the ship when at the back she saw a pond

“Ty come look at this!” She shouted.  Ty rushed over and to his surprise the pond was full of decaying fish and the pond was overgrown.

“What’s happened to these fish?” Ty said.  Bubbles began to form on the surface of the water, something shot out of the pond. It had jagged teeth and dark, red eyes.

“Mariana run!” Ty yelled. They ran to the front of the airship and hid under a piece of the burst balloon.   Soon enough, the monster was gone.  Leaving Ty and Mariana petrified and wanting to go back home.  Ty thought that instead of staying they should go and explore so nothing was going to eat them.  Mariana thought that was good idea. After 5 minutes of walking, they spotted a castle.                                                                                                        “Hey Ty we could probably seek help at that castle!” Mariana shouted. They both walked over to the castle but to their surprise it was abandoned. It had smashed up windows and a broken door. When they walked into the castle there was a pile of dead bodies. Not rotten.  As it was disturbing for them they rushed back to the airship in a hurry.


As time went on, Ty and Mariana where getting worried about the rest of the crew, as it had been 1hour.                                                                                                                                                                       “Should we try and fix the sky-ship as the rest of the crew aren’t coming back?” Ty whispered

“Sure but why we whispering?” she replied.                                                                                                                  “The monster will probably hear you if you make a single sound.” He replied back.  Ty went looking for tools to fix the sky-ship. When he found all the tools he needed he started to fix it. After 1hour and hard-work, he finally fixed one piece.                                                                                                                                                  “One piece?” Mariana shouted.                                                                                                                                                             “I am a kid I don’t know how to build things!” Ty shouted. At that moment, Ty and Mariana heard a noise.                                                                                                                                                                                  “Umm what’s that sound?” Mariana whispered.  They turned around and to their surprise it was the …

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