Chapter 2 by James and ronan
Chapter 2
I work at the grand hotel.I am a cleaner and it is a good job because you get to meet our staff that is very nice. She sat next to me and had an idea.”why are you hiding?”” Because I saw a whitemander out side.” She was panicing so much she was out of breath. Suddenly, the glass broke into pieces. Is it the whitemander? Me and the girl saw it’s leg then heard a loud scream from the beach. It sounded like a man Fighting. Me and the girl said “we have to get out of here before it jets in and hurts us.” I made her hide from it, “wait a minute we’re is it.”
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