What can faith do? By Poppy
Faith poem
My faith is made from-
The sparkling dust of belief,
The sweet scent of freshly bloomed roses,
The warm feeling of melted chocolate in your mouth,
The softest and squishiest cloud in the sky.
I found it-
Snagged in the corner of a dusty shop, caked in mud and spiders,
The crisp corner of a perfectly red apple,
Floating in the middle of a mcdonald’s burger,
Trapped inside anxiety.
My faith can-
Calm the roughest of oceans,
Warm the sad hearts,
Eat distress and make it disappear,
Help anyone who may need it right now.
If I lost faith-
Even my best friends will be disappointed in me…
It is good quality writing and very nice vocabulary But I have a question and it is if you are proud of what you wrote? If not what would you improve? If you are then great. I can’t really lend you an improvement other than maybe some more expressive vocabulary.