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Chapter 4 Is this the end

Chapter one 

Gorm attack

 

Hell breaks loose as Gorm attacks Chief-ton Lopkins Warren, three children are dragged out by Granny Smopkin. The names of the three children are Rodkin, Razkin and Rook.When they were in the bedroom Rodkin shouted “ Why are we in the bedroom? out father is being attacked !’’ The children listened to the chaos outside while Granny was searching for something but what was she looking for?

 

When Smopkin was calling Rodking he wasn’t listening he was away in a daydream while listening to war. RODKIN! Shouted Granny “ here take this .’’ It was something wrapped in old cloth. As he unraveled the old soggy cloth he found a magical, shiny and sharp iron sword. “ Don’t use it for our own will ’’ begged Smopkin. Razkin and Rodkin both nodded their heads. “ You two go through here ’’ exclaimed Smopkin, opening a secret tunnel while the kids stood there, jaws dropped.

 

As Granny tried to get the children into the tunnel they had two options : go into the tunnel or protest against Granny they chose to protest ; Smopkin had to use strength  like a bear to get them in the tunnel. After two minutes of fighting Granny eventually won and she shoved them into the tunnel. She was exhausted so she went downstairs just to see piles of dead warrior rabbits. She sat there distraught as a Gorm crept up on her so silently she didn’t know he was there, as she turned around the Gorm had sent her to the land beyond.

 

On the other hand, the children ran to the closing door after being pushed into the tunnel but there was no escape- the door was locked. UGH! Now we have to go down this stupid tunnel. “ oh shush you just don’t want to walk do you.’’ argued Razkin. They looked in the bag that had vegetables ( lettuce and turnip )

 

They’re getting near the end as they could see, but they were so tired when they tried to talk their throat hurt. Rodking thought was so tired he thought his eyes were trying to harass him. They both decided to go to sleep otherwise they would lose consciousness. So they went to sleep but they heard something, something weird…

 

Chapter 2 

The escape

 

Rodkin,Razkin and Rookin woke up to a false alarm as they noticed a rock that fell off a cliff. The three of them got back up and ran to the edge of the tunnel but their legs were worn out still, they couldn’t run again, Rodkin felt so worn out ( despite the fact he slept for hours ). He was back on his feet in a matter of seconds, they were  cheerful after a while because they started to sing Brablemas songs. All was good but when Rodkin and Razkin were hungry they had no food  left, thats when they heard Rooking having the last bite of it all.

 

They were so angry but they couldn’t be angry for long because of Rookins little face. Rodkin and Razkin had to now walk the rest of the way hungry. Near the end of it they thought they smelt lovely turnip soup instead it was Radishes – Their least favourite food – they were at the end of the tunnel at chief meetup.

 

Rodkin, Razkin and Rookin arrived at where they wanted to be at the edge of chief meetup. The children knew where they were from there. The three of them went to the red water river to drink. Rodking saw that they had made it.

 

The children had a waterfall festival because they were so happy to be there at that moment. Razkin saw how far away it was and it wasn’t that far away at all she was impressed that Rdkin made it all that way. Rookin was fast asleep in Razkin tunic when they made it down the mountain.

 

They arrived at Wind holm but no-one was outside ‘‘ What nobody’s outside on Bramblemas eve ’’ Rodkin and Razkin knew something was wrong but they went inside for food and warmth.

 

The three were next to the fire hearing the cooks make radish stew. Outside they could hear the leaves swishing on the trees. Inside, they could hear the food being made with no effort. Razkin saw a rabbit carrying a box with iron in it, then it clicked they’re  working for the gorm. They ran for their lives but Rodkin got caught by the portcullis would they escape…?  

 

Chapter 3 The capture of the Gorm

 

They thought there was no hope but Rookin had said ‘‘ knif knif ’’ Razkin knew that he was talking about the dagger ‘‘This is going to hurt ’’ Razkin exclaimed. She cut it like butter and saw Rodkin desperately trying  not to scream but pain overcame him. She was in an awkward position but in the end she carefully cut it off.

 

As she told him it was okay she had managed to cut it off but Gorm and rabbits were chasing them. The three children had almost no escape but Razkin tried to outrun everyone. So many times the Gorm had nearly caught them the number of times they did it was close to the amount of blood coming out of Rokins head. ‘‘He’s bleeding out ’’ Razkin whispered so the mob of angry animals couldn’t hear her. She learnt in school, leaves help stop bleeding but it would have to be quick. As she grabbed the leaves she tripped. What will happen? Am I going to die? Is Rodkin as razkin okay? She picked herself up and by a few inches the Gorm missed her again.

A few minutes later, Razkin had escaped so she thought. But she knew the Gorm were mischievous  so it wasn’t over. A few moments passed, with no Gorm or crazy rabbits so things looked alright for **********!! A Gorm had snatched them but no ordinary Gorm, this was the leader of all Gorm. The three little rabbits had no hope, especially Rodkin who had none because he was unconscious. 

 

The Gorms leader whose name was Gormas the third was definitely recognisable. He was taller, had more skulls on his belt and more weapons and a bigger helmet. They had arrived at Gorm city but would they escape…?

 

Chapter 4 

Is this the end

 

Razkin woke up in a cage with Pookin but Rodkin was in another cage them, but he looked okay other than her because she had just woken up. “ Rod, Rod are you okay? ” Whispered Razkin, he gave a nod while focusing on something, he frequently squinted his eyes but what was he looking at?

 

A Gorm suddenly grabbed them, they struggled, fought back and tried to unwrap his hands but nothing worked. He showed them a familiar warren. It was pine tree “that was your home, right? “ Yes, why? “ Razkin said, barely able to breathe. She lied because she could see a tiny bit of dynamite. “ Do it gang “ boom! An explosion went off and Razkin shouted “ No. “ lying again. He took them back to the cages and left them there.

 

Suddenly, A demon rabbit called Athenless demon of love and hate appeared from the underworld and set them free for no reason” please take me with you they force me to torture little ones. She begged. Razkin questioned “ how can I trust you “ as she stepped back suspiciously. Athenless made a love heart in the sky and all innocent souls went to heaven.

 

She showed a secret tunnel out and the Gorm were waiting on the other side of it. They lifted the tunnel up and the rabbits now in a group of four ran. The four rabbits escaped after two minutes of running  and jumped into the terrain sea.

 

Athenless had taken the kids to black hart where they actually used to live but it was different there was no mess or bodies. They entered and dad was injured but alive and mum, mum was healing him. The parents of the adventure rabbits were okay and so they lived happily.

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