You are a grape picked from the vine for kings to eat.
You are a monkey swinging from tree to tree racing for the last banana.
You are a flowing river with monsters emerging from your depths.
You are a tornado twirling around like a prima ballerina.
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I like how you described the monkey swinging from the tree racing for the last banana
1.it is an amazing poem because i like the description and detail you have put
2.why is the first paragraph described as for kings why not for kids and kings to eat?
3.you could improve by desribing how the monkey raced or how he swung from tree to tree
The poem is so beautiful and so descriptive,
I like they way you said You are a monkey swinging to tree to tree racing for the for the last banana,
Does a poem have to rhyme to the line above it .
I like Maggie and Finley because it is so descriptive
This is a nice poem.
this is a good poem.
1. Good decrisption of ´everything´.
2. Why did you start every sentence with a *You are*?
3. Could you add more?