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7 Responses to “The Everything Poem by Izzy”

  1. Maisie W and Micheal G October 1, 2020 at 10:24 am

    I like how you described the monkey swinging from the tree racing for the last banana

  2. Maggie & Finley October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    1.it is an amazing poem because i like the description and detail you have put
    2.why is the first paragraph described as for kings why not for kids and kings to eat?
    3.you could improve by desribing how the monkey raced or how he swung from tree to tree

  3. Maisy and Ashton October 1, 2020 at 10:30 am

    The poem is so beautiful and so descriptive,
    I like they way you said You are a monkey swinging to tree to tree racing for the for the last banana,
    Does a poem have to rhyme to the line above it .

  4. I like Maggie and Finley because it is so descriptive

  5. This is a nice poem.

  6. from Alfred and alekzandra October 14, 2020 at 2:29 pm

    this is a good poem.

  7. 1. Good decrisption of ´everything´.
    2. Why did you start every sentence with a *You are*?
    3. Could you add more?

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