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You are by Louis

You are a Pair of  glasses found underneath a bookshelf at school,     grime and dust covers it’s golden border.

You are an iPad discarded on the tough floor 5 years ago it’s shattered expression is distressed as its put in the bin never to been seen again.

You Are an incredible book stuffed to the brim of the anbisones imagination of the author waiting for its knowledge to be shared with the world.

You are a broken clockwork clock it’s hands spinning as fast as a speeding car wheel, waiting to be fixed

You are a leaking water bottle waiting to be drunk out of but it will never come…..

THE END

 

 

2 Responses to “You are by Louis”

  1. Ava and Imogen B October 8, 2020 at 10:32 am

    Hi,
    We really like your poem and think it is great!
    I like the first verse about the glasses, left under the bookshelf.
    Could you add more information about the water bottle.
    Maybe try to remember your full stops when they are needed.
    We still think the poem is amazing and cant wait to see more.

  2. Hi,

    Louis i liked your poem not because your louis and because i am isabelle i really liked your poem.

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