You are dry water
a beautiful enigma,
You are a colourful peach
that is being destroyed every time its bitten,
You are a clean fish tank
protecting life from under the sea,
You are a year cold in winter
but yet hot in summer.
You are the hope of life.
You are day and night.
You are not anyone else but you.
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Hi its me Ruby from Antony School, you commented on mine! Anyway I love the line you are dry water, it sounds satisfying.
And have you used opposites? I would suggest to maybe make it bit longer
-Ruby