You are… Olivia SWW
You are dry water
a beautiful enigma,
You are a colourful peach
that is being destroyed every time its bitten,
You are a clean fish tank
protecting life from under the sea,
You are a year cold in winter
but yet hot in summer.
You are the hope of life.
You are day and night.
You are not anyone else but you.
Hi its me Ruby from Antony School, you commented on mine! Anyway I love the line you are dry water, it sounds satisfying.
And have you used opposites? I would suggest to maybe make it bit longer
-Ruby