2 Responses to “Shining star”

  1. Wow I loved this poem especially the bit that talks about rainbows considering the current global situation.

  2. I love how all the focuses are mythical. They are all so well described. One thing I would change would be about the pot of gold. I would have put waiting patiently to be dug up instead of just waiting.

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