Shining star
You are as special as a big bright STAR…
You are a never ending rainbow…
You are a pot of gold ready to be dug up..
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Wow I loved this poem especially the bit that talks about rainbows considering the current global situation.
I love how all the focuses are mythical. They are all so well described. One thing I would change would be about the pot of gold. I would have put waiting patiently to be dug up instead of just waiting.