You are – Otto
You are a mysterious monkey,
eating a beautiful banana.
You are a joyful jellyfish,
wiggling in the deep ocean blue.
You are the smell of fantastic food
cooking away in the oven.
You are the number 8
like the amount of legs on a spider
crawling down the wall.
You are an athletic ape
swinging on magical monkey bars.
You are a vicious viper
wrapping round your next victim.
You are a runaway reptile
avoiding capture by a hairs breath.
You are a number 10
a fat and a skinny pair.
You are the smell of strong vinegar
covering a batter of cod.
You are a number 1oo
a comedy trio
always backing you up.
You are the smell of strong soap
after coming out of a hot bath.
You are the noise of faint children
running wild in the playground.
You are a daring dinosaur
crushing cars and cabins.
You are the end.
I liked it when you said swinging on magical monkey bars .
Thanks
Well-done Otto. I really liked all the adjective choices. Also I particularly liked daring dinosaur and noise of faint children. Next time maybe just do a few verses. Can’t wait to see more of your work. Great job.
I like to work though and thank you.
Hello Otto, I love the sentence about the viper; it was brilliant! The alliteration on vicious viper was very good. Vipers actually have venom that can be extremely dangerous! Your ending was one of my favorite parts of the poem!
Thanks
Thanks for the imfomation
Hello Otto I really liked how you said you are a athletical cape swinging on magical monkey bars. Well done.
No efence but you said cape instead of ape and thank you
I like how you said that You are of the strong smell after coming out of a hot bath though do not as many verses ok. Archie-SWW
I like to work
and thank you