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forest poem

You are the deer dancing in the enchanted forest.
You are the fox lurking going to strike its pray.
You are the hedgehog joyfully living in its burrow.
You are the squirrel searching for nuts in the brittle leaves.
You are the butterfly flapping your yellow and red wings and looking wherever they takes you.
You are the robin tweeting in the morning.
You are the leaf floating out of a tree in the autumn.
You are the

9 Responses to “forest poem”

  1. This is a really good poem, I love how you described the animals.

  2. I like the part about the fox striking it’s prey and the part about the autumn leaf.

  3. I like how you described the hedgehog but maybe name the robin and hedgehog.

  4. Amazing poem I live the forest theme

  5. Your description is amazing

  6. Nice poem but the end I don’t think was finished part from that it was quiet good. Some of the adjectives and descriptive phrases could have been levelled up though like the colours.

  7. 1.We liked that you made forest into enchanted forest.
    2.Why is you sentence not finished?
    3.You could have described the wings on the butterfly.

  8. Grace and Laurance October 1, 2020 at 10:28 am

    We love how you descried the forest as enchanted and not just a forest.

  9. I like the sounds👍

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